It's Still Life

I think I’ll put this through the “refinery” and trim it down. The “refinery” is Joseph Harker’s method of stripping fluff out a piece of writing, and restructuring its symmetry.

Summer Sand and Sea

I.
The sun
a solitary child shining
on the sea

II.
Its waves
of tousled curls pour
out little shells

III.
A breeze
of liquid wind to breathe
upon my skin.

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Written for RDP “Liquid”. Some artwork is created using Midjourney AI, and is identified as such in the ALT text. Imagery and poems ©Misky 2023.

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(The Original)
Summer Sand and Sea

I.
The sun,
like a solitary child shining
on the sea.

II.
Its waves
of tousled curls that pour
out little shells.

III.
A sea breeze
of liquid wind
to breathe upon ones skin.