30 June: Flash Fiction – Eternity of Green

AI artwork: a sorcerer-looking old man with a long beard in the forest

Day 30. Write a short story about a hidden, enchanted forest where magical creatures dwell.

An Eternity of Green

In the depths of the forest, where ribbons of pale sunlight tease out shadows, enchantment lives.

Tree roots are chiselled, emerald mist floats luminescent, insects fly in trails of stardust singing in notes to please the ear. Just occasionally, white feathers blow from dandelions – a sprite’s breath.

It is a world that gnaws on the hearts of some mortals, it lurks unobserved like sparks around fire.

This forest is built of beauty, leaf on leaf, with dawn’s promise to heal the world with nature’s seed. And the only mortal who is allowed to enter the forest is a woodsman with a low and slow voice. He lives in the heart of a tree on a shadowy steep hillside. The morning sun warms him when he wakes and bluebells ring out when it’s time to sleep.

And while all around sleep, he watches the small stars through tangled branches, he plays charades with blackness, and he remembers his children and a woman of pleasing shape, but he’s never found his way out of this forest, and when he tries, the mist shivers and laughs at him, and the forest possesses the whole of him.

But he’s never really tried to find his way out. He’s happy enough dreaming of wind and shadows of what was once home.


Words: 271. Written for The Wildness Challenge Day 30: Write a short story about a hidden, enchanted forest where magical creatures dwell. What adventures await those who discover it? Artwork is created using Midjourney. Imagery and poems ©Misky 2023.

20 responses to “30 June: Flash Fiction – Eternity of Green”

  1. A gnarly old guy looking not dissimilar to that gave me a quote for a fence yesterday!

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    1. Who better than a woodsman to mend a fence! Good morning, P.

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      1. Morning Misk. It’s got a lot cooler, hasn’t it?

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        1. A lot cooler, and now it’s doing the “mizzle” thing (mist and drizzle), and this isn’t good news because we’re meeting up with 9 old friends in the Cotswold on Monday for a week of trampling about.

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          1. I think it gradually improves from here

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  2. This is a lyrical piece of writing – quite charming.

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  3. Fabulous! I’ve greatly enjoyed this Wilderness Challenge.
    Morning, Misk!

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    1. I’m glad to know that, Nancy, and good afternoon to you!

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    1. Thank you, Paul, and thanks for a good challenge this month.

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  4. You wove a wondrous magic spell of prose to meet this challenge, Misky. My Stetson’s off to you. Heat, heart and work has kept me from you blog. Have a wonderful weekend. I, of course, will be making blood runs1 😉 https://rolandyeomans.blogspot.com/2023/06/are-you-hidden-penny.html

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    1. Thank you, Roland. Take care out there on the road.

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  5. Jane Dougherty avatar
    Jane Dougherty

    Yes, lyrical is the word. Enchanting too.

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    1. Thank you. The Wildness was a good challenge. And now … a bit of a rest as I’ll be offline for most of July.

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  6. A fine piece of lyrical storytelling to round off the month – do you have a reflections piece on this challenge?

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    1. Thank you, and I don’t think I’ll be doing any reflecting. I will say however that if you’re looking for a poet who’s worthy of reading, take a look at Jane’s blog at https://thefourswans.wordpress.com/category/all-posts/

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      1. Yes – I am following now. Where are you off to – anywhere nice?

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        1. Just emailed you…

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