9 June: for Unicorn Challenge (flash fiction)

Graveyard with headstones in the overgrown vegetation. B&W. AI MJ.

The Rise of Crows

She knew something was wrong in her head when they started perching on the windowsills, and on the roof and fence. Crows, thick as blackness on the overhead lines. One two three four … six twelve twenty on the clothesline. Like worry beads. Crows in the field crawing at the cows. Gathering in the graveyard. Pecking at the shadows. Screaming at the church bells that rang out every quarter hour.

She knew something was wrong. Her head thumped like Black Rod’s crows at the door. Her fever pitched in her dreams like a mad-man. And when she started choking, from what she thought were all those black crow feathers in her throat, that’s when the doctor conceded that there was something very wrong with the girl.

By morning, the star of the college basketball team, the tallest girl in the village, was dead. The church bells rang out as they buried her under the tallest headstone in the graveyard. And the crows loved their elevated perspective.


Written for the Unicorn Challenge 9 June. Featured artwork is created using Midjourney. Imagery and poems © Misky 2023 Image to the left is supplied as the writing prompt and © Ayr/Gray.

17 responses to “9 June: for Unicorn Challenge (flash fiction)”

  1. Worthy of Hitchcock himself!

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    henhouselady

    This short piece is well-written.

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    1. Thank you very much.

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  3. Chilling and disturbing, Misky, with such poetic imagery.
    And artwork to match.
    Great story.

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    1. Thank you, and thanks for the image to work from.

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  4. Misky has officially crossed over into the dark side.
    I love it!

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    1. I’m delighted. Thanks!

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  5. Love your all-out description of the murder of crows, especially the comparison to worry beads. We know where this is going!

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    1. Thanks, Liz. Glad your enjoyed reading it.

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  6. She should have been more mindful of that old Aussie expression ‘stone the bloody crows’. 😉

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  7. What an excellent poem describing the descent into psychosis for whatever cause. Crows get a bad press, we take their unpleasant noise and their going around in gangs not to mention their blackness with it’s associations (in our culture). “Crow” by Ted Hughes is my favourite book of poetry since being introduced to it at school..

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    1. Thank you so much, Andrew. I actually like crows, but it needed to be an edgy for the prompt image.

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  8. Well, Misky, that started dark and got steadily darker!
    Love it!

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  9. To quote Leonard Cohen “You want it darker”. I love darker. I Love this 🖤

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