5 May: A Mouse’s Dream Diary

AI Art: a mouse in the kitchen

An Entry from a Mouse’s Dream Diary

So it’s true. Mice do dream. Of drowning. A drowning dream. This is the season of water. Of fractious storms and troubled air. I run along the floor, pressing close to the skirting boards and wall. Avoiding wires and cords and shoes, baskets, books and magazines. Slipping under a newspaper, and then I stop. Catch my breath. Sniff the air. It smells of green sky pools. Whole oceans wanting to flood the floor. I chase the sodden light down the hall, floorboards swollen and stained. Around the corner, and a final dash toward the big clock. The clock. The clock. I race up the pendulum, tick and tock. Tick and tock. Hickory. Dickory. Dock. The clock strikes 8. Am I awake?


AI Digital Artwork is my own, created using AI Midjourney. Imagery and poems ©Misky 2023. Written for Unicorn Challenge: story (max 250 words) based on an image of a mouse. Words: 139

26 responses to “5 May: A Mouse’s Dream Diary”

  1. A great image – you really know how to get the prompts just so! And I love the story – into the mind of a mouse before breakfast even…

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    1. Thank you so much! He is a sweet little thing, isn’t he.

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      1. It’s so exciting waiting to see what will emerge – like opening a lucky dip…

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        1. It is! Exactly. And sometimes, Oh, no … what a disappointment.

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  2. Welcome to the Unicorn Challenge, Misky! And what a vividly described, imaginative story to start with.
    I can just see the wee mouse and feel its panic in the short phrases you use. Especially in the ending. Wonderful.

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    1. Such a great picture too.

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      1. Thanks. All of the images here are done using A.I.

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        1. This is a new concept for me. i must have a look. thanks.

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    2. Thank you very so much. I don’t usually venture into flash fiction, but this was fun to write. See you again next Friday.

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      1. Glad you had fun with the challenge! Look forward to seeing you next week.

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    1. Ha! Thanks, Jo!

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  3. Fantastic! Welcome to the challenge, Misky. Love your charming mouse tale!

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  4. That was fantastic – I ran along with that poor little mouse.

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  5. Brilliant Misky! 👏👏👌👌 Had me hooked from start to finish! 😁😁❤️❤️

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  6. Superb, Misky.
    I especially like ‘It smells of green sky pools.’
    Great imagery.
    And welcome to the Unicorn Challenge, it is further enriched by your presence.

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  7. Well done, Misky! You touched all the senses and brought me into the mind of a tiny, jittery mouse. I once wrote a story featured in an anthology of a mouse who rode in the shirt pocket of an einherjar — ( those who fight alone”) one who had died in battle and was brought to Valhalla by a Vallkyrie. You brought back happy memories of doing that.:-) https://rolandyeomans.blogspot.com/2023/05/what-happened-to-world-of-our-childhood.html

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    1. Lovely, and I’m glad that you enjoyed reading it. Thank you, Roland. I’m off to read your latest. Thanks for the link.

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  8. Firstly I adore this mouse picture!! And this mouse dream! So good. So good.

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    1. Thank you, c. I think he might be one of my favourites.

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  9. Can’t add more praise than what precedes. Welcome to the challenge, Misky, with your frisky mousekyteer.

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    I’m loving this! Amazing art work!

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