15 March: dVerse Places

Beach scene, driftwood, seagull, lighthouse, trees.

The Coast

That sound from the lighthouse,
a primitive one-string cello,
bent low and playing to the fog.
The waves, whose chorus
dissolves back into the sea.

I was raised by the sea, lived and
breathed by its sound and scent.

Rocked to sleep in a metal dingy
with a big black Mercury engine.
That engine, diesel fumed
and bluing the air — the sea
always swayed me to sleep.

I miss the scent of that water.
It was salt, sulphur and iodine.
It soaked into my skin and hair.
A persistent smell, as authentic
as pine resin.

Mum thought it smelled medicinal,
like the savoury scent of time.
It made her seasick, she said.

Those scents are somewhere in me
between memory and mirage.
Somewhere back in my childhood.
Somewhere back on the coast.


Words: 165. Reading time: -1 minute. Written for Ingrid’s farewell on dVerse Poets, “a poem of place and space”. AI Digital Artwork is created using Midjourney. Imagery and poems ©Misky 2023 Shared on Twitter #amwriting @midjourney @dversepoets

23 responses to “15 March: dVerse Places”

  1. So interesting how you used smell in this poem. The scents you conjure are powerful – I feel like I can smell them too. I can hear the slap of the water on the dinghy and feel the slap of the sun too. And yet, it was your description of the smells that took me there. Great writing!

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    1. Thank you so much, Jo!

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  2. Lovely. A coast warts and all. I think anyone brought up by the sea never loses a nostalgia for it, and smell of the most evocative of all the senses.

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    1. Thank you, Jane.

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  3. Hundreds of sun kissed memories of my beloved Montauk, noses tickled by the scent of the salty Atlantic, seaweed and starfish strewn about the wet sand, the lighthouse a stoic sentinel upon the rocks.

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  4. Rocked to sleep in a metal dingy
    with a big black Mercury engine.

    Were you old enough to actually remember that, Misky?


    David

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    1. I was still falling asleep in that boat when I was 12, so yes, my memory goes back that far. 😂

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  5. I also grew up by the salt water coast, and those scents I really miss. I still leave by the coast, but here it’s brackish water.

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    1. It’s an idyllic way to grow up.

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  6. I could exist in the world you describe ~ gorgeous.

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    1. Thank you, Helen.

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  7. Ingrid,

    Thank you for leaving us with your beautiful words. We will miss your voice, and the way you interpreted the world around us. You will be missed very much.

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  8. The infusion of scent in this poem is absolutely remarkable, Misky!! 😍😍

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  9. Beautiful vivid writing. Love the scents of water:
    I miss the scent of that water.
    It was salt, sulphur and iodine.

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  10. I loved your building your verse around the scent, now in your mind. Those will always be if you can remember. I also have one, hiding and waiting to be recognized, it is the smell of wet puppy dog. I hope COVID hasn’t muffled it for good. You?
    ..

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    1. Thankfully, my sense of smell and taste returned about a month after I tested negative … finally (I was positive for nearly 2 weeks). Yes, a wet puppy. A gorgeous scent full of love.

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  11. I love the way you show, not tell, Misky – I enjoyed this!

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    1. Thank you so much and best wishes on your new ventures.

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  12. Very moving imagery ! Nice to reflect on childhood in a happy way

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