It's Still Life

3 March: Reworked Mezzaluna

AI art. pencil sketch of dog looking at crescent moon.
A Mezza Luna 

My mezza luna, 
crescent moon. 
Up there, pronging 
errant clouds. 

Up there, where stars 
move heaven and earth. 
Cut and sliced, night’s 
fabric redressed.

Full to blousy. 
Wax to wane. 
Sad and joyous, 
so pale and faint. 

Up there. Up there. 
We stare up. Up.

©Misky 2023 Shared with #amwriting on Twitter.

Misky

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4 responses to “3 March: Reworked Mezzaluna”

  1. abigfatcanofworms avatar
    abigfatcanofworms

    Yes! I think this feels right. It’s easier to read than the haibun for some reason.

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  2. Michele Marsh avatar
    Michele Marsh

    Positive vibes on a Friday always inspiring and uplifting

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  3. romanticallyinclined23 avatar
    romanticallyinclined23

    This was beautiful – both the art and the poem. ❤️

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    1. Misky avatar
      Misky

      Thank you very much.

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