19 August: White-Out Erasure

Erasure poetry reads: the rising and falling, reflux of water, like a cataract in the abyss and idle in itself, I confessed to the thunder,  Look now, said the old man.

A Confession to Water

The rising and falling,
reflux of water, like a cataract
in the abyss and idle in itself.

I confessed to the thunder.
Look now, said the old man.

Source: “The Portable Edgar Allen Poe,” Introduction page. ©Misky 2022 Shared with #amwriting on Twitter

9 responses to “19 August: White-Out Erasure”

  1. love these. goes rushing off in all sorts of directions.

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    1. I liked that little punchy bit, too. 😂

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      1. You’re very welcome.

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  2. Fabulous title Misky ❤️

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    1. Thank you! ❤️

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