GloPoWriMo Day 22: Green

WikiArt (public domain) The 2nd Day of the Creation, 1925 by M.C. Escher

The Return of …

rain in the
that falls
between stones

grey and flat-footed
a return
to earth’s soil

it is seeping
with roots

green on green

For NaPoWriMo Day 22 “Repetition “ I’ve tried to force a repetition of meter in this one. The operative word is “tried” as I have no control over how the reader might approach that. Image from WikiArt (public domain) The 2nd Day of the Creation, 1925 by M.C. Escher ©Misky 2022 Shared with #amwriting #glopowrimo #napowrimo on Twitter

9 responses to “GloPoWriMo Day 22: Green”

  1. Oh, Misky, this is wonderful! 💕🙂


  2. Very lovely!! I am about as poetic as a meat axe tonight. I am flipping words over my shoulder at a rate of knots, hoping I’ll look behind me and find an accidental collection that I like.


  3. Lovely words with a lovely image!

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  4. Here’s to the graphic beauty of your poem page above!
    I like your look.

    Liked by 1 person

  5. Let there be (a wet) green. Fine work, M.


  6. So beautiful, Misky. As a desert-bound mermaid, I crave green. And blue.

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    1. Thanks, De. 🥰


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