It's Still Life

21.1.22 Where We Can Begin Again

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for GoDogGo Cafe : Tuesday Writing Challenge . Photo by Karim MANJRA on Unsplash ©Misky 2022 Shared with #godoggocafe #amwriting #apoemaday on Twitter

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6 responses to “21.1.22 Where We Can Begin Again”

  1. Misky avatar
    Misky

    The line breaks are all wrong. I’ll rewrite this one.

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  2. abigfatcanofworms avatar
    abigfatcanofworms

    It’s so enigmatic. For some reason the waves breaking in single file had my brain circling around itself. I love the night slipping off and the bleating arrows into heaven. Mysterious and dreamlike. Reminds me of a lullaby.

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      Misky

      Thanks. I’m going to rework it, trim it back a bit. It blathers on a tad. It might be that line breaks, instead of couplets, sorts it out. By the way, how are your fingernails doing? I know that’s a bit out of the blue, but I was thinking about you yesterday.

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      1. abigfatcanofworms avatar
        abigfatcanofworms

        THe ugliness is slowly growing out, thanks. They’re not painful anymore but my fingertips are still numb as are my toes. Nobody can tell me how long that will last. Thank you for thinking of me. That’s very sweet! ❤

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          Misky

          Amazing how we heal, isn’t it. ❤️

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          1. abigfatcanofworms avatar
            abigfatcanofworms

            Quite! ❤

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