Day 27.1 NaPoWriMo 2021

Remixed Daydream

Here I am again

just like Mum always said
I did too much of …

daydreaming of
warm ruby-stained
fingers, and

June fields of white blossoms
tucked into ripening

and the air
is a touchable
of scent, solitude,

and future,
and I recall thinking,
one day I’ll have an orchard.

And I did.

Written for PA Day 27 “Remix or rewrite an old poem” ©Misky 2021 Shared with #apoemaday on Twitter

5 responses to “Day 27.1 NaPoWriMo 2021”

  1. I love that sense of smugness in those last three words, and the way theat the blossom is tucking itself into the fruit. 👏

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  2. Some times you just have to stomp your foot and end something, in this case a poem. 😂😂


  3. Lovely poem. Glad you got that orchard.

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  4. Strawberry….yum (even imaginary ones)

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