Primordial

photograph by @abigfatcanofworms at Out of the Cave on WordPress. With permission.

Primordial

it is no small
thing, this
        dark spark.
a troubled heart,
        a slippery place
        of spills and chills.
like rain that falls
        faint and light.
ever so slight, that shift,
that slide into pride
        exposed.

Inspired by: image @abigfatcanofworms at Out of the Cave, on WordPress, used with permission, and #FOWC Fandango’s One Word Challenge prompt “exposed”. The header image is a photo by Dan Meyers on Unsplash #FOWC and #APoemADay on Twitter   ©Misky 2021

7 responses to “Primordial”

  1. Fabulous poem. I love the rhymes, and the chilly atmosphere invoked. It’s very well done.

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    1. Good. Good. I so wanted to do your brilliant photograph proud. Thanks again for allowing me to link back to it.

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  2. My pleasure. I feel quite honoured! 😊

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  3. I love the way the words in the poem slide over and across each other, like the elements in Worm’s super photo. You did it proud.

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    1. Thank you very much, Hobbo.

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      1. you are very welcome. 🙂

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