Miz Quickly’s Day 19 & 20

A Few Thoughts About …

those doors in dreams
some of wood

some with knobs
some without

some open, and then
won’t close

some won’t open

some say Thank you, Ma’am.

some doors see
some are blind
some are naked
some I loathe

some pull you
into the bowels of earth
into scented water
into flight
into spells and thrills
into the bed where you slept

some draw you into faces and
the smoke of my own breath.



b4 Day 20 the last line is from “Song of Myself by Walt Whitman, and Day 10 Day 19 “Doors”. ©️ Misky 2020

4 responses to “Miz Quickly’s Day 19 & 20”

  1. Doors and dreams can be very challenging! 🙂

    Really honestly I did not read your poem before I wrote mine.
    We went in similar directions again…
    and used the same last line!!!

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  2. I was drawn to that line also but went another direction. I really like how these are doors in dreams

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  3. Wonderful. I see you caught up with Doors and Faces too, LOL! Your ending was great.

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  4. I like your formatting here, especially those stairsteps of door sounds!

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