Flash Fiction Prosery

Flash Fiction: Prosery 144 words

Dead

I am dead. I don’t know the how or the why of it. Or even the when of it. Details. Details. These things are unimportant. That information is in the past, it’s for the living to unravel, they want to know how it happened, they need the science of it, the details so they don’t make the same mistake. The living breathe easier if the cause is genetic. Well, unless they are family in which case it sort of loops into a mindless agitation. Gnaws like a dog with a bone, or cuts silence like the far away cry of skylark. But I admit, it does feel like I’ve been interrupted mid sentence. Maybe lost within the white space between words. If I could script my own ending, I’d wake up now. But I am a poet, and this ending seems poetic to me.

for dVerse Prosery and Open Night Inspired by a line from the poem acquainted with the night by Robert Frost. Posted from Gilleleje Denmark

©️ Misky 2019

16 responses to “Flash Fiction Prosery”

  1. Oh this takes such an interesting perspective on death. These lines:
    “But I admit, it does feel like I’ve been interrupted mid sentence. Maybe lost within the white space between words.” …. maybe that’s what happens in death….we are simply lost within the white space between words…lost in the space between the last two words we said or the last roll of eyes we got from someone or the last two….????

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  2. The perspective of death is a unique one… almost like living on without a purpose which is actually makes me think of depression just as much as death. Robert Frost’s poem is said to be about that.

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  3. scotthastiepoet avatar
    scotthastiepoet

    Brilliant stuff Misky and uncanny too.. I’ve been musing in a similar way recently – so really made me smile tonight…

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  4. Death as white nothingness is espoused by 7th day Adventists. I need to believe in the Buddhist’s Bardo; life between lives, a bridge to cosmic dimensions. Hey, I’m 75 tomorrow, and I need hope and light and destination

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    1. I’ve no clue what waits for me but I doubt that it’s nothingness. I just write what pops into my head, Glenn. It’s nothing more than that. And a very happy birthday to you – with wishes for many more to come.

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  5. I like your description of death as “interrupted mid sentence. Maybe lost within the white space between words”.

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  6. I like the aspect of death that the details of it for the dead are unimportant, something for the living to worry about. I can also see where it would feel like an interruption. Very much enjoyed reading your prosery, Misky.

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  7. “But I admit, it does feel like I’ve been interrupted mid sentence. Maybe lost within the white space between words. If I could script my own ending, I’d wake up now.” This is incredibly raw and poignant! ❤️

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  8. you are so right about people needing to know the details … never understood that! Death will come and we won’t know when how or why …

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  9. I agree with the others who have shared. I like the strong voice in this and especially these lines, ““But I admit, it does feel like I’ve been interrupted mid sentence. Maybe lost within the white space between words.”

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  10. The living breathe easier if the cause is genetic… This is a great line.

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  11. Beverly Crawford avatar
    Beverly Crawford

    What an interesting conjecture about death! Sort of unsettling somehow! Captures one’s attention, however.

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  12. Perfect, Minsky! I love it.

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  13. We are stricken innately as curious beings, so easily troubled by unanswerable questions, yet we pursue the futility of it. Maybe the answers are more easily derived from the place the poet in this piece occupies.
    Abundant food for thought in your piece. Well-expressed.

    Cheers!

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  14. I often think about the process of death, but this is an interesting twist of that. I like the matter-of-fact tone. (K)

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  15. I love, “interrupted mid-sentence “. People always want every detail for comparisons sake.

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