We’re On the Old Road to Spokane
I’m 10.
It’s a Saturday morning.
Early.
Before the worst of the heat sets in,
and turns the I-90 into peanut butter.
By noon, the road shines like ice.
Dad says it’s a mirage.
I say it’s water.
Mom says she has a sick headache.
My sister’s sitting where the sun
pours through the car window.
Her hair is tangled in trickling sweat.
No one dares to ask,
Are we there yet?
for twiglet #126 “Shining like Ice”
16 responses to “for Twiglet #126”
I can remember that car ride. Brought back memories.
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Nightmares 😂
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Ha! Did we have the same Mom?
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LOL 😂 we can always pretend!
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Hahaha! Nice.
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Lovely poem about those dreaded long car rides (that at times were surprisingly entertaining lol)
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Too hot to enjoy asking if we’re there yet although I imagine everyone wishes they were.
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This was great Misky. Great atmosphere leading to the payoff. I am smiling ear to ear… 🙂
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Hot and sticky it can be. I like the childhood memory Misky.
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I can’t hear the word “Spokane” without thinking of the intense performance poet in “The Marvellous Mrs Maisel”. I have no idea where it is, actually, must look it up. Regardless, I think we’ve all done that journey. And we make our kids do it now. We love a road trip. That’s what we tell ourselves, anyway.
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This is wonderfully vivid! It brought back many memories of road trips 🙂 tangled hair and trickling sweat indeed.. it’s like this here in May! ❤️
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Are we there yet?…i just had to ask…bkm
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I can feel the tension…
My father always had the perfect answer, to give a series of towns that we were to repeat and learn to understand the distance… (and then we ceased to ask)
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Goodness me. Are we related?
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🙂 there are always ways for parents to silence kids.
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Yes, I too remember those long horrid car rides. I always ended up sitting in the sun, no air so hard to breath…
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