for Twiglet #112

A House of Sticks and Straw

There’s a place in my head where
I sing to myself. Talk to myself.
A space for my very small voice.
I’m loud and bold inside my head,
but in truth I’m a half empty cup
pretending that I’m half full. And,

carrying a tune is no small thing.
It’s up there with diving off
the end of a pier, which I’m
never likely to do. Water, water,
tempting with its half promises.
Half full. Half empty. Half alive.

Its bottom vanishing into a lost
reference point, like milk dripping
off the kitchen table. Just sticks
and straw. It’s rather like love,
and then along comes the wind
and blows your house down.

 
 

Twiglet #112 “in the key of C” and dVerse Open Night

13 responses to “for Twiglet #112”

  1. I like your description of water with half promises and being half alive. And the association of love with the wind blowing the house down at the end.

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  2. Truth – love the stuff!

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    1. Thank you very much!

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  3. I can relate to the first stanza as I self-talk a lot too. Love does that, like the wind, knocking you and your home down.

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    1. Nothing wrong with a good conversation 😂

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  4. Isn’t it great to have a place to just be me!! Our minds are wonderful… allowing us to be and imagine all the things that may never come to reality!

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  5. I feel very much how much we all wish to be bolder and louder… somehow we’re tied to our fear, just like that bridge in your image…

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    1. It’s a great image, isn’t it. I forgot to credit Unsplash with it. I’ll rectify that today.

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  6. Got me with the self-talk that never quite reaches its pitch.

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  7. Feels like one was left at the train station… or at the end of the pier on the last day of summer and there isn’t anyone else around.

    But the talking to oneself… I think we all do that.

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    1. A train station, eh? Hmmmm.

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