Twiglet #108 and dVerse Haibun

Gone. Too soon our celebrations done. Customs. Quaint. Traditions and rites. That was then. But now, on this stretch of unhurried street, all’s quiet. It seems tarnished. Drowned in icy rain and galvanised sky. A Christmas tree hidden between bins and the wall. It’s seen happy days — good will and peace on earth. Now it’s just tinsel on a breeze. Memories catch in my throat as silence walks and talks in great secrecy. I stomp my boots on the porch steps. Boots love January.

Rain, a cutting scythe,
long and straight as wet sticks.
Come spring, I’ll sit on this porch

 

 

for dVerse Haibun “January” and Twiglet #108 “in great secrecy”

18 responses to “Twiglet #108 and dVerse Haibun”

  1. Such a a depressing January with: Drowned in icy rain and galvanised sky. Here in Toronto its very cold too. I also love each line of your haiku, ending with the promise of spring.

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    1. More like a dull thud compared to December, rather than depressing. January is what it is. 🥴

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  2. Ooooh. I love the melancholy of this. Especially: “Now it’s just tinsel on a breeze.” I think I am not the only one who feels like my house looks like the Grinch just left, after taking everything. Bare walls. No sparkles. Fewer lights (I have fairy lights in several places all year long, for just this reason.)

    Also LOVE the personification of those boots! 🙂

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    1. Thank you, De!

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  3. “Now its just tinsel on a breeze” – love that sentiment, Misk. Great haiku.

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    1. Thanks ever so much.

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  4. A succinct and melancholy picture of January, Misky. I love the ‘tinsel on a breeze’ and ‘Boots love January’ – it’s true! The rain in your haiku is too realistic – come on spring!

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  5. Nice view from the perspective of those boots: “Boots love January.”

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  6. Silence walks and talks…. and I talk back to it. 😌 Beautiful piece!

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    1. Thank you, Violet.

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  7. Love the haiku and the setting ..

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    1. I’m glad you enjoyed reading it.

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  8. Your use of metallic adjectives (tarnished, galvanized) building up to “tinsel on a breeze” is so gorgeous and lonely.

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    1. Thank you, Nora.

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  9. Memories catch in my throat as silence walks and talks in great secrecy.- love this line the most but your every line has such meaning and depth to me. the fullness of January, a bitter lonely month for some. oh those memories do catch in the throat, i choke on them often, i really enjoyed reading your haibun

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