Based on a Poem Title “Of Mere Being” by Wallace Stevens

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Based on a Poem Title “Of Mere Being’ by Wallace Stevens

I remember being so young
— being bewildered
by scent.
Dad could smell snow coming.
And rain.
It was a scent like white closing
in on hills,
or a shock of winter stars falling.
Or the closing white of
linen sheets on a firm mattress.
It’s a chemistry of madness.
Like kissable lips, or my
aging privilege.
It’s a difference of mere being.

 
 

for Miz Quickly; a 2nd shot at a poem inspired by a title, and Twiglet #95 “A Kind of Madness

5 responses to “Based on a Poem Title “Of Mere Being” by Wallace Stevens”

  1. Love love this:
    “a shock of winter stars falling”
    and that “chemistry of madness.” YES.

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  2. “It was a scent like white closing
    in on hills,
    or a shock of winter stars falling.

    Like kissable lips, or my
    aging privilege.
    It’s a difference of mere being.”

    This is outstanding, Misk! Language that lingers.

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  3. Stevens is such a challenge – even in this simple title – (and thanks for his brilliant poem) – and here you’ve made an answer to his question – compressed into a scant 14 lines – all those sharp, melancholy and lovely images that make up living. I particularly liked the (ironic) contrast: ‘Like kissable lips, or my / aging privilege.’ Terrific stuff.

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  4. Oh, yes. I can relate. My father could taste a bite of food and tell you all the spices used.

    We age though – I’d like to think like fine wine (not aged vinegar!)
    OK – yes we can be moody 😉

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