dVerse Quadrille #63

A Stoney-Face Sky

Summer’s end burns exhausted,
as if falling faint from effort.
The sky is stoney-faced,
torn and tense and shining,
and trickling jigsaw shapes
against the windowpane.
Earth chews its bottom lip,
nervous, life’s slowing
to a static stride. Winter
watches in the distance.

 

for dVerse Quadrille #63 44 words, excluding the title, and including the word “earth”

24 responses to “dVerse Quadrille #63”

  1. I like how this is packaged between summer’s exhaustion and winter’s watching.

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  2. So well done! I await, with earth, for the change….

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  3. Gah. Such brilliance in your words, Misky.
    THIS:
    “The sky is stoney-faced,
    torn and tense and shining,
    and trickling jigsaw shapes”

    and the imagery caused by this:
    “Earth chews its bottom lip,
    nervous,”

    In awe.

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    1. I’m definitely overdosing on alliteration in this one! 🤣

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  4. I love thinking of summer exhausted and earth chewing her lower lip, nervous. Really really nice.

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    1. Thanks, Tommie.

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  5. I too love earth personifcation with:

    Earth chews its bottom lip,
    nervous, life’s slowing
    to a static stride.

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    1. I think there might be too many Esss’s there. 3 is pushing toward ear-trickery a bit but 4 is excessive, I think.

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  6. Nice interpretation of the seasonal apprehension from Earth’s perspective. Delightful piece.

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  7. I love the earth chewing its bottom lip. I’m chewing mine too seeing winter in the distance.

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  8. The imagery is exquisite in this weaving of words…nice poem

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  9. I love your portrait of an exhausted summer’s end, Misky, and the stony-faced sky. My favourite image is:
    ‘Earth chews its bottom lip,
    nervous, life’s slowing
    to a static stride ‘,
    especially the sibilance in ‘static stride’, which conveys the slow hiss of breath before nature goes to sleep.

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    1. LOL! I hadn’t noticed the slow hissing stuff when I wrote it. How funny!

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  10. I can picture the sky “stoney-faced, torn and tense and shining”… such a wonderfully evocative poem ❤

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  11. I know that winter is around the corner… and earth with just tilt it’s head and go to sleep… love your words

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  12. “Earth chews its bottom lip.” LOVE that line! Here summer is not going quietly — supposed to be 98 degrees today.
    And smiling I am as I misread your last line….I thought I read “Winter wretches (retches) in the distance” ! Now that would shift the meaning a bit 🙂

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  13. The sense of slithering created by the alliteration makes this a joy to read aloud. Especially with Earth biting its lower lip, nervous, and winter watching this unfold. It forces me to read slower, with a sensuousness. Brilliant!

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  14. Yes!! Love, “earth biting its lower lip”. This whole poem is filled with vivid images.

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    1. Thanks, Sara. xx

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  15. ooh the Earth chewing its bottom lip. Love this imagery!

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