dVerse Rooms

workshopMan

Grandpa was autumn. That’s how I saw him. In his brown trousers and rusty-red shirt and a folded paper hat on his head that looked like an origami boat, and he’d stand there in his basement workshop sawing up some piece of driftwood, sawdust flying about like a blizzard. A lightbulb hung from a cord over his head, and the sunlight streaked as if the narrow window at ground level was squinting at us. I’d sit on a wooden barrel, and he’d try to convince me that socialism would save humanity. Him, looking autumn-dry and sun-scorched, and just a bit too fragile to be playing with power tools, and me, wearing something that Mum made from calico cotton on sale – meaning that she, me and my sister were all dressed alike – and hardly a day goes by that I don’t wonder if socialism might save the human race.

Crows in the wheat field
Scarecrows don’t scare anyone
Except maybe me

 
haibun Monday “A Room

7 responses to “dVerse Rooms”

  1. I like the thought of being scared by scarecrows and this phrase: “too fragile to be playing with power tools”

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  2. Love the calico dresses, and thinking of Grandpa as Autumn.

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    1. Thank you! 💕

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  3. Lovely descriptive piece – and the haiku is a treat. Reckon that socialism gotta be better than wherever we’re headed now – even if we have to wear calico :-).

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  4. Wrapping up my haibun reading and what a treat to find yours here! The prose is so rich in detail and the comparison of your grandfather to autumn makes him come forward in our visualizing him…from the color to the origami-like hat to the fragility you mention at the end of the prose…autumn is a fragile season. I love the detail of the calico dress and then the added insight about who else is wearing the same material. The bare bulb hanging over his head is a stark contrast to the warmth this scene emotes.

    The haiku is perfect – traditional with nature in the wheat fields…a bit of humanity in the autumn kigo of the scarecrow…and the keirjo/break comes in the pause we instinctively feel in our reading – after that second line. The added insight comes in the last line and is just a great embellishment on the socialism mention from the prose.
    So very well done!

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    1. Thank you so much, Lillian, and thanks for the prompt.

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  5. Love the image of the sawdust snowstorm. This is a wonderful tribute to a well loved philosopher.

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