a dVerse Tanaga

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These are stale days. Always
grey and knotted. Nowadays,
shadows shed colour; paler
than air, blanker than paper.

 

for dVerse: poetic form: Tanaga 7.7.7.7/aabb (untitled)

9 responses to “a dVerse Tanaga”

  1. Yes, they are stale days. I never heard it said that way before.

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  2. Oh I hope that the paper will be splashed with color soon…

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  3. The grey and knotted days seem to have passed here for the season, but my internal weather can change at any time. Nice tanaga!

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  4. Stale days is so sad. Grey and foggy is OK in the morning, but sunny is needed before noon. Hope you see sunnier ones soon.

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  5. “shadows shed colour” – wonderful phrasing!

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  6. kaykuala

    ‘stale’ is implying without much life and zest but allowing for lots of improvement in the offing!.

    Hank

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  7. There’s beauty in the starkness of this.

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  8. Oh my goodness, Misky! There are stale days….there is so much in those words. Your description here is marvelous.
    Adding the word “nowadays” shifts it for me to much more than a misty foggy day….it shifts it to the lament of aging…although I’m still of the age-old where aging is good. But I think of those who slip into dementia…or find depression with a closing in…stale days indeed.

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  9. I know those grey and knotted days. Loosen up those knots.

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