Quadrille #52

Catching Stars

It’s March
just beyond the edge
of rain-soaked snow.
Beyond the fire
of northern lights
and imaginary sheets
of singing smoke.
I watched the stars
that shot sideways,
plotted maps to catch
their washed-out blurs.

Their light
is my night —
a deep ripeness.

 

 

for dVerse Quadrille “Fire”

14 responses to “Quadrille #52”

  1. This is just too gorgeous, Misky:
    “plotted maps to catch
    their washed-out blurs.”

    Sigh.

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    1. Thanks for the prompt, De! xx

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  2. Poor March – “she” seems to be an “in-between” month. A longing for anything but her 🙂 Poor month of March.

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  3. Lovely dense imagery here – the explorer, the astronomer and the poet up all night – the coda is profound. Bravo.

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  4. I love the plotting of a map path for shooting stars… Very good!
    Dwight

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  5. I love these images, taking soaked snow, imaginary sheets,

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  6. Rain-soaked snow…great poem!

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  7. Oh I do love the stars mapping across the sky. I wish for some clear skies.

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  8. “plotted maps to catch their washed-out blurs.” This is just beautiful!💞

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  9. A stunning Quadrille, Misky! The opening line ‘It’s March’ puts me straight into the moment, although our snow has disappeared (for the time being). The repetition of ‘beyond’ makes me look ahead to spring and upward to the stars. I love the lines:
    ‘plotted maps to catch
    their washed-out blurs’.

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  10. I like their light being one’s night.

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  11. Beautiful writing, Misky!

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  12. I like the deep ripeness of night. Cool.

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  13. This has a dreamy, magical feel to it. ☺

     

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