Twiglet #66

 
Hung fat balls from the apple tree. Incoming. An avalanche of birds.

 

Poetic form: Ginsberg’s American Sentence,
17-syllables. written for Twiglet #66, and dVerse Open Night

22 responses to “Twiglet #66”

  1. You remind me I need to refill my feeder before the weather howls again…
    I haven’t hung fresh fruit… I bet the squirrels would enjoy that too.

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    1. I discovered today that the birds like Cheerios!

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      1. String Cheerrios and popcorn 🙂

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  2. Love it! An avalanche of birds is worth having.

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  3. The avalanche birds is visually stunning and all birds love the apples lots of nutrients. Love this poem a lot. 🙂

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  4. Love to have that… We have those balls in our feeder too.

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    scotthastiepoet

    Perfect counterpoint here – so well balanced and made me smile…

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  6. Love the imagery of those approaching birds!

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  7. Truly a delight. Because we change venues in the winter we have the joy of feeding those birds year-round. Love how you used the form–a favorite of mine.

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  8. Were the apples getting over ripe…that brought the birds in great number??
    dwight

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    1. It was the fat balls. The apples are long gone.

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  9. kaykuala

    Great American sentence, Misky! The more effective the shorter it is

    Hank

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  10. Excellent is of the form. The 17 syllables say so much. I’d love an avalanche of birds!

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  11. Nice and short. I like the avalanche of birds.

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  12. An avalanche of birds is worth having 💖 Beautifully penned.

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  13. The beginning had me thinking: what kind of poem is this??? Then I figured it out! 🙂

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  14. LOVE it! Smiling I am😊

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  15. When I ride my bike I feed the crows. They are very smart and beautiful. They love Cheetos, I read it in the Autobahn magazine.

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    1. I’m going to assume that you mean “Audubon” magazine, who specialise in birds, whereas Autobahn is a German motorway. I didn’t know that Cheetos. Unfortunately, they aren’t easily found in the UK.

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      1. Yes. Lol! Spell checker or whatever thanks for understanding that. Yes, Cheetos is what the researchers used they say it’s their fav. They do seem to love them!

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  16. So glad to have the season back again. Twig let= fun.

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