dVerse Concepts

Pulling in the Thunder

The fisherman plants his hopes
against the current. Sand and
salt and sea, it stings his lips.
His life is pebble-rattling, like
thunder pulled from the sky.

It’s a lullaby to deafened ears.
His fairytale songs of seagulls
white, and nights crow-black.
Wings beat the air, as long
nets draw in heavy and wet.

 

 

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16 responses to “dVerse Concepts”

  1. I liked the parallel of pulling in fish and pulling thunder.

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  2. Love the steadfastness of that fisherman, and contrast of color of black and white. Your title is unique, love it.

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  3. Just fabulous…I can see the fisherman and hear the gulls.

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  4. It seems sad that only the gulls hear his music as he toils on and on

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  5. The resignation of one’s self to the humdrum of the day!
    Dwight

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  6. Beautiful poem. Thank for sharing this; so well written

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  7. What an awesome poem! I see the quality of determination and steadfastness here and an unquenchable spirit 😊 superb, really lovely 😄

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  8. I love the title, Misky, and the picture you paint of the fisherman planting his hopes against the current. I can feel the sting of the salt and the ‘pebble-rattling’ thunder. I spotted Dylan Thomas in ‘Nights crow-black’. The final lines sum up the man’s determination beautifully.

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    1. I hadn’t realised Dylan was working my pen! I’ll take whatever help comes my way. 😉

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  9. Determination and where to drop the net

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  10. There is such a struggle in your words, the weight of his nets and the lullabies that doesn’t work… but he’s still steadfast

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  11. beating the odds, overcoming, surviving, struggling

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  12. Your opening lines drew me in, and I was one with the fisherman and his labor. It seemed a satisfying life; even a calling. Well done, Misky!

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  13. Ah, this is beautiful. I like the hope and optimism here – the work may be hard, but it gives fulfillment. I love the setting you painted, too. I can almost see and hear the seagulls in your poem.

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