for dVerse Artwork

Under a Wrinkled Sky

The night sky wrinkled between the stars,
a slow procession, that cat and that elephant.
The cat, it sat, ignoring it all, as all cats do,
and the elephant, drumming the wooden boat
with its weighty foot, and shiny tusks of brassy
bold against the midnight black – it breathed,
it blew, like a long trombone. That magnificent
beast was a merry orchestra. Those two were
awash and afloat with drums and bells and
horns all going, and that cat, ignoring it all.

 

 

for dVerse “Artwork“. Image by artist Catrin Welz-Stein

20 responses to “for dVerse Artwork”

  1. LOVING this! 🙂 The trombone elephant and the cat ignoring it all 🙂 Smiling I am! 🙂 So glad you posted to this one.

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    1. Fun prompt, Lillian. Thank you for the inspiration.

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  2. “and the cat ignoring it all” oh so true. What a lovely bit of fantasy.

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  3. Love love LOVE this:
    shiny tusks of brassy
    bold against the midnight black

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    1. Thanks, De! 😀

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  4. That’s quite whimsical. Actually, it does remind me of our old cat. She could ignore a brass band marching through the living room

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  5. Love this, Misk! This image spoke to me as well.

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  6. As cats do!! so true…Great poem… I could hear the music!

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  7. Your poem was magical and musical and I had to chuckle at the cat ignoring it all. I can almost hear the elephant’s song.

    it breathed,
    it blew, like a long trombone. That magnificent
    beast was a merry orchestra.

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  8. The elephant – social and loving. The cat – mysterious and a solo act. Funny, they are both my son’s favorite animals. Love the “Wrinkled sky”

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  9. I liked the passivity of the cat and the sound of the last line with “horns” and “ignoring” being close rhymes.

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  10. This made me giggle. I know people like that cat – so intent on being cool they miss out on all the fun. I’d rather hang out with the elephant. Lovely touches in this poem, too, the wrinkled sky echoing the elephant’s skin…

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  11. That’s a fabulous title, Misky, and a wonderful opening line! I love:
    ‘…the elephant, drumming the wooden boat
    with its weighty foot, and shiny tusks of brassy
    bold against the midnight black – it breathed,
    it blew, like a long trombone’.
    Lear, eat your heart out!

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  12. “that cat, ignoring it all.” that is the ever-loving truth

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  13. Just love the cat ignoring it all.. so very feline… a true delight to read.

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    1. Glad you enjoyed reading it.

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  14. I like how you mention the personality of the animals. This is creative!

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  15. Oh cats are masters of ignoring. Love your take on the image.

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  16. So like a cat…(K)

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  17. you gave the cat such character, and so like well a cat! i like the way you created the lines that paused at the right moments and then flowed

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