Haibun 22.01.18

Her Lunchbox Spoke Volumes

But that business of a first kiss was hard for my little sister — she hit Christopher on the head with her metal lunchbox (mine was Royal Stewart red plaid; her’s was bright flowers). Between us, she was always the softer one. I lived in jeans and summer t-shirts, even when it snowed down hard. She wore dresses, flowered mostly, even when it snowed down hard. She was precise, persnickety. Practised her penmanship between ruled lines. Straight as military. My letters flowed into words that plunged down the right side of the page. Never could write in a straight line. Compensated by writing in psychedelic-hypnotic circles. “Are you trying to be clever?” the teacher would say. You have to expect such deviations when a left-hander is forced into right-handedness. But such problems are no bigger than the child. Such problems scent childhood.

scents of brittle pine
the shadow of a seagull
it pleases heaven

 

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10 responses to “Haibun 22.01.18”

  1. interesting dichotomous haiku

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  2. ‘Her Lunchbox Spoke Volumes’ – that title is such a hook, it made me sit up! Then I read the opening line and chuckled. This is a stonker of a haibun, Misky! I love the description of your sister as persnickety – that would have fit my sister at that age. The comparison of your writing styles is so real to me; before I got my glasses at age nine, my words plunged too – and I wasn’t left-handed. It’s true, such problems scent childhood – great link to the seagull haiku.

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    1. Glad you enjoyed it. I just love Haibun Mondays. Thanks for the prompt, Kim.

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  3. Oh I do love the differences among siblings… so different in life and penmanship… and you are the poet.

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    1. Thank you so very much.

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  4. It is good that the problems are no bigger than the child.

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  5. you have taken an ordinary childhood day and turned it into a memorable sibling memory. I did not want the haibun to end, I was so caught up in your descriptive lines. pulling me in to a beautiful story.

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  6. love this – wonderful descriptive prose…

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  7. Beverly Crawford avatar
    Beverly Crawford

    The world owes the left-handers of the past generation a huge apology!

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