de-Grammer for dVerse

Another Cloud

I knew a girl,
she grew she grew,
a hued music lived inside her,
finger-dancing across her knees.

Another day, acid-etched,
another soft-edge cloud spilled,
another bird’s scribbling word.

And her cat’s the colour of sunset.
It keeps itself just beyond
her dancing-fingers reach.

 

 

for dVerse and Gnomes

10 responses to “de-Grammer for dVerse”

  1. A poet you are. Proud you should be! (Sorry! I’ve been watching old Star Wars movies….) I love the sound and feel of this poem. Read it twice; both time aloud.

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  2. This is gorgeous. I love it.

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  3. A really good read…finger dancing is gorgeous.

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  4. Love this, Misky, especially:
    ‘a hued music lived inside her,
    finger-dancing across her knees’
    and
    ‘…her cat’s the colour of sunset.
    It keeps itself just beyond
    her dancing-fingers reach’.

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  5. Wonderful… the cat just of reach with sunset color just wonderful

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  6. There’s something quite haunting about this one. It’s going to stick around.

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  7. LOVING this. I find it a gentle read and one that makes me smile. I am LATE to the reading..having been on the wonderful grandmother scene for two days. So glad I came back to read and saw this one. “A hued music lived inside her” — such a beautiful thought…and that finger-dancing and a cat the color of sunset. In my mind, I just need to add some beautifully tinted warm wool and needles here to complete the picture. 🙂 That’s where I want to be 🙂

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    1. It’s posted late because I’ve been busy as well. I’m delighted that you liked it, Lillian.

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  8. Late to respond but wanted to say this is lovely, Misky. I like the sharp sounds in the second stanza, yet there is a soft feel to this overall….well, yes…..cloud-like.

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