Sleeping for dVerse

The Ragged Edge of Sleep

I.
Even as I dream, I hear his sleep.
I’ve come to expect it, the way you
expect water to be wet, and I wonder
about the depth of my dreams if his
sleep was no longer mine to hear.

II.
Mine was an embalmering sleep, and
I dreamt of trains, plumes of steam
and gleaming rails straight and hard
and loud as a wedding band, and that
dream was a watermarked night, chased
by cloudy tangles of grey-black sky.

III.
I resign my exhausted sleep to clouds
that roam overhead, those whispering
trinkets in the sky, collecting dust
from fading stars, but my sleep is
too far away, and the sky is postponed.

 

 

for dVerse: “Sleep

12 responses to “Sleeping for dVerse”

  1. Glenn Buttkus avatar
    Glenn Buttkus

    My health issues prevent me from sleeping in bed with my wife–oddly I sleep worse alone and she sleeps better–go figure.

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  2. The sky postponed!!!!

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  3. The last stanza is so perfect. Wonderful set Misky.

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  4. I like the questioning in the first part. If the other person were not there how much would that influence one’s dreams? Some people report that they have shared dreams so this influence could be larger than we expect even in people who are not conscious of any dream sharing.

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  5. I love how each of parts is a separate part. All making up a wonderful triptych – love the sky postponed.

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  6. There are echoes of Macbeth in your title, Misky! Shakespeare had a lot to say about sleep, so it’s no wonder. I recognised quite familiar patterns of thought in your poem – albeit from long ago – the uncertainty of a relationship in:
    ‘…I wonder
    about the depth of my dreams if his
    sleep was no longer mine to hear’.
    I love the dreams in the second stanza, with its stunning simile:
    ‘…gleaming rails straight and hard
    and loud as a wedding band’
    and then in the final stanza:
    ‘…those whispering
    trinkets in the sky, collecting dust
    from fading stars, but my sleep is
    too far away, and the sky is postponed’.

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  7. I think the dream follows us, even if we don’t recall it or get a distant to it by the performance of day. So one better have sweet dreams.

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  8. This is a lovely tortured ramble around the ragged edges. Trains, rails and the not knowing where you are or who you are with, are all part of the skirting on the verge of sleep but never quite slipping in.

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  9. I just watched a great movie called “Our Souls at Night” starring Robert Redford and Jane Fonda, a tender look at elder loneliness. Great movie! Loved your poem!

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  10. I love that second stanza! There’s so much good clear imagery packed in there. Nicely done!

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  11. Dreams apart, and dreams entwined. Vivid images here, and an outstanding finish.

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  12. Oh, I like this. The beauty and the torture of hearing someone you love sleeping.

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