A Sunday Whirl

Crow

It’s out there in the trees,
under the wilt of summer heat,
and it’s a gnawing whistle,
a tinnitus ring. Apart and
pitched. The craw tone
of a string plucked, broken
threads falling into echoes
for crushing under wheels.
And then it was lost,
like words never
committed to print.
I once heard a bird
that sounded just like that.
Just the once.
And never again.

 

 

Sunday Whirl #304 words: whistle, touch, wheel, word, gnaws, ring, prints, apart, broken, echo, thread, fall

6 responses to “A Sunday Whirl”

  1. spot-on – ‘the craw tone of a string plucked’ – and the nod to another poet with ‘never again’. Love this

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  2. LOVE this, especially:
    “The craw tone
    of a string plucked, broken”

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  3. A neatly woven poem

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  4. This really caught my eye, “The craw tone
    of a string plucked, broken”.

    Like

    1. I think it’s all those sharp consonant sounds together. Makes it fun to say. 😊

      Like

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