dVerse Quadrille #29

Jane’s Ashes

That afternoon became
the entire day; that’s the way
of memories — morning’s chorus
of seagulls wheeling updrafts
migrating across county lines,
barren hedges and low light
of off-shore storms —
all forgotten.
We only remember
weeping hearts, and releasing
pink balloons in her memory.

 

 

written for dVerse’s Quadrille #29 44 words “Balloons”

7 responses to “dVerse Quadrille #29”

  1. Whew. Yep. Perfect.

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  2. Beautifully sad & touching!

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  3. Lovely remembrance.

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  4. I think releasing pink balloons must be a perfect remembrance… remembering the best.

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  5. A lovely memory and way to celebrate it.

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  6. Great opening sentence on this. Well, the whole thing is great, but the beginning set the stage for poignant greatness.

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