Twiglet #16 “those grapevines”

Rooted in Density

He misread erratic
for erotic. He read on
and on, told himself,
“just wait for it – wait for it”
but erotic never came,
and now he stands
over those grapevines,
waiting for them
to grow him some wine.
“just wait for it – wait for it”
he whines. Next he’ll be
weatherproofing clouds
because that’s what he does –
he just waits for it.

 

 

written for Twiglet #16 “those grapevines”. This took on its own direction. I was originally thinking of Napa Valley when I wrote “those grapevines”, but this ended up in a place far, far away. New Twiglets are posted every Tuesday at The Twiglets. Join us for a bit of no-pressure fun.

16 responses to “Twiglet #16 “those grapevines””

  1. “just wait for it – wait for it”
    he whines.

    It is a pity when one reacts in a nonchalantly way to just be unconcerned about any consequences

    Hank

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  2. i especially love the ‘weatherproofing clouds’ lines. this has a great rhythm – well done!

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    1. Many thanks, James!

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  3. I love where this ended up -in the misery of waiting ~

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    1. Thanks, Grace! 😊

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  4. If you trust in rumors you will end up waiting… so clever

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  5. Such an elegant form! Love your way with words 🙂

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  6. Cool and crisp and a little sour to me; I really really like the physical look and rhythm you created to match.

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  7. The way I interpret the first part of this poem is someone is reading something and is continually disappointed, but he or she keeps reading anyway. I guess the solution is to stop waiting, in this case stop reading. In the case of grapes, waiting seems appropriate. In the case of “weatherproofing clouds” because all he does is waits puzzles me.

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  8. Reminds me of my Dad…he should rest. Not so much a patient man for some things. And he’d read what ever he wanted into everything…
    (Thanks again for another fun prompt.)

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    1. My pleasure, Jules. Thanks for joining in.

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  9. Fascinating ! All unexpected. I was waiting — jeez, I hope I am not like him. 😉

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  10. Next he’ll be
    weatherproofing clouds

    This is a brilliant write.

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  11. Thanks for the introduction to twiglets. I like this one very much. I would say more, but … wait for it!

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    1. Looking forward it, Beverly. Just post the link to your poem here so we know where to read it!

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  12. ‘because that’s what he does –
    he just waits for it.’ -> felt sad on this. 😦

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