for Sunday Whirl #289

This piece is completely depressing. It’s fiction, based entirely on a dozen random words.

 

A Temple to Misère

Ten years gone, and I’ve
filled a moat around my heart.
I still reach for you,
expect your touch,
but all I sense
is a shapeless absence.
An ache.I miss you.
I soak in emotion,
and leak.

I’ve lost the words to say
this is impossible.

Sleep. My sleep is smoke.
It comes in fits
and swings — flat as skin
as I track and trace you.
I thought I saw your smile,
but it was my tears dreaming.
I struggle through the eye
of a needle, and lie down
beside your memory, here
in this temple to misère.

 

 

This week’s words: miss saw sense bits words flat leaks eye temple track swing smoke. Written for Sunday Whirl #289

6 responses to “for Sunday Whirl #289”

  1. Absolutely achingly lovely.

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    1. Thanks, Pearl, but I worry that people might think I’m going to throw myself under a bus.

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  2. That you have loved and lost is far better than not to have loved at all, whether it was but a moment or fifty years or more. To share such love is a wonderful achievement no matter how long.

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  3. fun verse.
    the metaphor is impressive.

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  4. Just shows that one doesn’t need to live through misery and despair before one can write about it with skill!

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    1. Thanks. I appreciate your reading it so thoroughly, and leaving me a comment.

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