dVerse Mixology

Straight Up Rain

I still toast this twist
of love. It’s troublesome
at times — on rare days,

it’s sour as cold weather
or straight-up rain.
It’s a tipsy life,

this tonic that drowns
our sorrows, and I think
of you, your forged smile

it’s a quiet vesper, and you
are a heart’s elixir.
This is our time, you say.

So we sit, we drink
in our liquid courage.

 

 

written for dVerse: Mixology

13 responses to “dVerse Mixology”

  1. This is just beautiful, Misky. An intoxicating love poem. 🙂

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    1. It’s a rarity. I avoid love poems like the plague. 😉 This one just wrote itself, oddly.

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  2. liquid courage…. i love that!

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  3. Oh! Yes. It is a tipsy life… smiles

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  4. Loved the “liquid courage” line. Well written.

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  5. Love the luscious love potions

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  6. So we sit, we drink
    in our liquid courage.

    It works when one persists in carrying it through. Nice take Misky!

    Hank

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  7. The phrases “forged smile” and “tipsy life” stood out for me. I assume this couple have other stable partners in this “twist of love”.

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    1. I hadn’t thought it through that far; I’m happily married. 😀

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  8. I agree with Frank. I think this portrayed relationship is ‘on the rocks’. 🙂

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  9. Very alluring Misky as it rolls along nicely.

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  10. Rosemary Nissen-Wade avatar
    Rosemary Nissen-Wade

    Oh wow, gorgeous!

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