Miz Quickly’s Day 12: Where I Live

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Blackberrying with Sylvia Path

I’m on a morning stroll,
and I smell snow.
I know it, like a sailor knows
hooks, and knots, and knows the sea.
It’s coming. And soon.
Arctic winds bridge the seasons,
giving reason to leafless trees
and icy winds, long frigid nights
and woolly bed socks.

Nobody’s on this footpath today.
Lonely hedges, bare thorny twigs,
and summer’s blackberries
turned to jam.
And honey bees take up shelter,
protesting, still protesting
those barren muddy meadows.

But I live here
in this poetry,
waiting for today’s snow to pass,
and Sylvia’s blackberries to return.

 

 

inspired by Miz Quickly’s Day 12: Where I Live and Sylvia Path’s poem “Blackberrying”. The word “bridge” comes from a recent dVerse prompt. Some phrasing from Plath’s poem is included in this poem.

8 responses to “Miz Quickly’s Day 12: Where I Live”

  1. I’m particularly struck by the last line, which is really powerful and works to force me, not that this is bad at all, to stop, and go back to the beginning of this poem, and reread and linger again in the rich imagery. 🙂

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    1. I’m glad that you enjoyed reading it. Thank you.

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  2. I like the imagery of the bees protesting ~ Love the whole tenor of the poem Misky ~

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    1. Thank you, Grace.

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  3. Love this place… you give the sense of waiting for change. It always change

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  4. I love that I read this after seeing your FB post that it is snowing. I really like the way you did this and the closing makes it full circle.

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  5. Sigh. Just so lovely, Misky. I want to be there. I can see the jam stains.

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    1. That Plath poem is one of my favourites.

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