A Bit of Pure Fiction for Sunday Whirl #280

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It’s Never Just About a Back Door Slamming

More like a mean demon wind,
always bristling against
my good nature, banging
like iced-cruel fingers, he said,
in that way he has with words…

The back door slammed again, bruising the door frame.
It was already hanging thin by its own echo.

Damned kids can’t do anything
quiet, he said, and I noticed
that rubbery vein on his forehead,
growing and thumping like a ball.

No telling, he said, how much
it’ll cost to rehang that door.
He finished lacing up his boots,
muffled a wish about a good day,
and walked off toward the barn.

Sometimes I wish he’d keep right
on walking, and never come back.

 

 

written for Sunday Whirl #280. This week’s words are: demon bang muffled cruel boot ball bruise mean hang cost always back.

6 responses to “A Bit of Pure Fiction for Sunday Whirl #280”

  1. I like the tone and how smooth the piece is when read aloud.
    Understanding that there are things we all live with, and wish sometimes things would change… permanently.
    Randy

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    1. Thanks. And how lovely that you took the time to read aloud. 😀

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  2. Getting on with each other is all about tolerance and accepting that we all think differently. Sadly some of us are fixed in our ways and others truculent to the extreme. The piece is beautifully written.

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  3. Grumpy old devil! Excellent read though. I’ll shut the door gently on my way out.

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  4. A wonderful piece of fiction indeed – although many a cat knows the truth

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  5. I love this. Seems like the cat is taking it all down.

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