dVerse: The Music of Words

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I.
Staccato Heat

Siesta,
and the streets are free,
noiseless,
bright and hot.
Flamenco hot.

The rain in Spain, she says,
the rain in Spain,

but there’s not a drop of it.
Sitting there,
still, be still,
white hot skies,
and she’s
in the midst of
magnesium light.

On the edge.
Combust.
Ignite

But there’s no movement
when there’s no rain in Spain.

 
II.
Those Calando Views

The old yellow house,
marigolds
in the window box,
roses climbing
on the picket fence,
cat asleep
on the door step,

empty milk bottles
waiting for return,
a girl stands
behind lace curtains,
Most can’t see her,
but I sure can.

for dVerse: Music from Words using line-breaks and rhythm.

18 responses to “dVerse: The Music of Words”

  1. This has to be one of my favourites for this prompt, Misky! I love the structure, the imagery, the language and I can see the girl behind the lace curtains!

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  2. I really love the second one, and this section from the first:

    “white hot skies,
    and she’s
    in the midst of
    magnesium light.”

    This made me smile:

    “a girl stands
    behind lace curtains,
    Most can’t see her,
    but I sure can.”

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  3. A compositional choreography of words. Stunning.

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  4. This is so well done. You have created such a sense of place and a moment in time using those musical line breaks. Brava.

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  5. Absolutely beautiful. These both brought me to tears….how wonderful these poems!

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  6. a girl stands
    behind lace curtains,
    Most can’t see her,
    but I sure can

    A pretty girl will always be seen however much she avoids detection. Benefits of being attractive!

    Hank

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  7. My goodness this is absolutely stunning a write!!❤️

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  8. The two parts are stands as antipodes, yet there is a wonderful melancholy that carries through.

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  9. Oh that last bit about the girl…there’s a mystery in that. I want to hear more!

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  10. Late to the reading — was cavorting this extended weekend with my grandchildren.
    I must say — I LOVE these both! The first one is so….sultry….hot. The second so much more adagio, largo….pause for a fermata. Visual and aural too.
    Well done!

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  11. You are absolutely in your element here. 🙂

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    1. Gosh, this is such an old one. I’d forgotten all about it. Thank you!

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      1. You are very welcome.

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        1. How did you happen on such an old one? That’s from 2016.

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          1. Dunno. It was just waiting for me as a new post in my followed sites! 👍

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            1. Did you go time traveling back 6-years this weekend? 😂

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              1. Spooky, eh! 😂

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