dVerse Quadrille #21

supermoon

Between the Days

Somewhere,
between harvests
and rain storms,
and lingering wooden crates
with mythic mounds
of apples,
(seems only a week ago)
the moon raised itself,
as if to order
our world to rights.
It was a ripe
spoon-fed ball, and it
took our breath away.

 

 

for dVerse: Quadrille 21 with 44 words. Including “breath” or “breathe”. 44: no more; no less. Image is from Unsplash CC:O (no © and no restrictions), with effects added by Pixlr.

13 responses to “dVerse Quadrille #21”

  1. Love those last three lines so much

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  2. Oh those last three lines. It seems you and I both wrote about the recent supermoon but your poem is breathtaking.

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  3. Such beautiful imagery.

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  4. I love the ending lines which captured what I saw recently with the supermoon ~

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  5. Yes those spoonfulls, wonderful, and how short the time since those apples were here…

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  6. That supermoon was amazing.

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  7. So stunning, Misky–you breathe just the right words, my friend.

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  8. Lovely poem with great imagery. Well done. 🙂

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  9. The imagery here is absolutely exquisite ❤️ Kudos!!

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  10. beautiful lines…..well painted….!

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  11. A beautiful poem for an amazing moon, I love the last three lines especially 💜

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  12. Rosemary Nissen-Wade avatar
    Rosemary Nissen-Wade

    Wonderful how you make the language at once beautifully uplifting and cosily down-to-earth.

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  13. Love those spoonfuls, Misk.

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