dVerse Haibun #24

goldengatebridgefog

A Reach Beyond

That bridge was a perfect thread. A muscle painted red, as if pre-rusted for weather, dressed in dregs for fog. Motionless in its long posture, and locked in love like opposites attract. And there was no pretence that it was something other than its intended purpose — a pier across the air — a reach beyond the edge of worlds. A bridge from here to there, and possibly to nowhere at all.

Be cold and stark and bare,
Be a watchful brailled eye,
Where black water flows.

 

 

for dVerse Poets, Haibun Monday: “Bridges”

17 responses to “dVerse Haibun #24”

  1. Ah!!!! My home. My heart quickened when I saw the picture.
    Now I live 17 500 km away. Sigh.
    Your words are lovely!

    Like

    1. We lived in Mill Valley for a few happy years. Now we live 8,611 kilometres from there!

      Liked by 1 person

  2. This is the bridge of all bridges.. love how you describe it with its rust colored appearance… I considered an image like that for my writing….

    Like

  3. I admire that muscle painted red, locked in love and brailled eye under flowing black water. The personification of the bridge is unique and amazing.

    Like

  4. A pier across the air – love that. And love that if it was read out loud, you might think it was peering across the air, too. Bridges are the most exciting bit of architecture/engineering out there.

    Like

  5. My goodness ❤️ you make that bridge come alive with your apt and vivid imagery 😀 beautifully done.

    Like

  6. I love ‘a reach beyond the edge of worlds’, a great write :o)

    Liked by 1 person

  7. I’ve only seen the bridge in pictures. Your poem is perfect and gives the sense that it is alive.

    Like

  8. A bridge from here to there,
    and possibly to nowhere at all.
    Where black water flows.

    One has to be wary these days. There are elements wanting to cause dissensions in subtle ways

    Hank

    Liked by 1 person

  9. A muscle painted red…there was no pretence that it was something other than its intended purpose… beautifully written!!

    Liked by 1 person

  10. Oh Misky! I love the lyrical description of this bridge: ‘a perfect thread. A muscle painted red, as if pre-rusted for weather, dressed in dregs for fog’ and ‘a pier across the air’.

    Liked by 1 person

  11. what a love poem to a bridge – that taut muscle description is perfect!

    Liked by 1 person

  12. “That bridge a perfect thread. A muscle painted red, as if pre-rusted for weather, dressed in dregs for fog’ and ‘a pier across the air’.” WoW and WoW, Misky- mysterious and other-worldly

    Liked by 1 person

  13. Rosemary Nissen-Wade avatar
    Rosemary Nissen-Wade

    Lovely writing, particularly the haiku.

    Like

  14. I also like ‘a muscle painted red’…it leads into a light and dreamy vision of such a popular and loved bridge.

    Like

  15. that bridge came alive with muscle-red, and a pier across the air. i felt like the bridge was reaching out to me.

    Liked by 1 person

Leave a reply to little learner Cancel reply