dVerse and Poetic Arrangment

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The Fragility of Memory

She and I, sisters
of a common skin.
We charted and deconstructed
our childhood
like avenging angels.
Episodes of bitter dullness
and beaten love.
We organised those memories
into tidiness. Displayed them
like moths, wings pinned to
dry — crisp and fragile.
She swore never to forget,
and she cursed me
when I eventually did.

 

 

dVerse explores poetic arrangment

15 responses to “dVerse and Poetic Arrangment”

  1. I do love the whole narrative you tell.. the orderly arrangement of a childhood passed, and the forgetfulness… I sense the breaking of a bond here….

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    1. It’s not an easy relationship…

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  2. I am touched by your story using the prompt word ‘arrangements’…the image of moths pinned onto a board is powerful.

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  3. Love the title and story about family bonds, so fragile yet can be so volatile ~And maybe remember in different ways ~

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  4. Whew. This is a stunning, strong piece. Excellent in both language, and thought.

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  5. I know… It’s hard living pinned to someone else’s memories when your wings want to fly away.

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  6. A beautiful piece of writing! I have sisters…they must have forgotten, or maybe I did.

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  7. Very powerful poem, take on the prompt. The image of moths wings, pinned, is truly stunning. I truly like the question at the end.

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  8. Ouch. I JUST commented on Crystal’s poem about the fact that, when my sister was dying of pancreatic cancer and we revisited memories we had such different versions of the same things. Memory doesn’t want to be catalogued I suppose. We adapt them to our needs.

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    1. Yes, we absolutely do adapt them, and some people can move on from them, and others just can’t.

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  9. Memory is as fragile as relationships, sometimes. Beautiful poem, Misk.

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  10. I have lived this poem….still do.
    It is puzzling when two different recollections of childhood exist and/or the ability to move on. It has to be frustrating for those that can’t to watch those that can.

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    1. They feel betrayed, I think.

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  11. Evocative poem…we can be pinned to painful memories or fly free!

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  12. Real, raw and poignant. Evokes a powerful picture of sibling and family relationships and how we get pinned to the roles we are assigned.

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