for dVerse: Haibun #19

There’s Always One

By 10 o’clock it was darker than the wrath of god. We heard the tide rising behind us, soft and tender, the chatter of rolling pebbles, and before us a driftwood campfire rising and speaking in tongues of cackling fury. We were girls on the edge of hormonal burst, ten of us as I recall, and we filled the air with songs. Dylan and Stones and Donovan. We were mellow and yellow, and we sang to the mussels and clams and salmon and cod that slept until the sun lifted mauve light and decorated morning. We ten, watching stars falling into daylight. It was a sunrise to always remember; in a lifetime, there’s always one.

I remember pine,
and bees sipping nectarines,
such freedoms are clouds.

written for dVerse Poets: Sky Haibun

16 responses to “for dVerse: Haibun #19”

  1. Wonderfully described memory! Ah those girl-shared days of youth! Especially love the image of bees sipping nectarines.

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    1. Thank you, Lillian!

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  2. What a wonderful memory! Love the bees sipping nectarines and singing to the fish, clams, and mussels.

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  3. Such a scene-setter! Led right into wonder.

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  4. “a driftwood campfire rising and speaking in tongues of cackling fury.” Lady you sure do have a wonderful way with words!

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  5. Poetic, pretty prose. Mellow and yellow, ah

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  6. There is always one… what a great memory… yes there is one that stands out I think… love the singing for the fish too.

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  7. That was a super memory and very textural with all those creatures painted beautifully with imagery and nature.

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  8. Very descriptive. I could see the images in my mind. Well written.

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  9. Oh this is so full of zest and life 😀 just beautiful!! ❤️

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  10. Oh, how gorgeous! What a great experience and memory. Beautiful three-line summing up, too.

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  11. bowled over by the colours and imagery – the way the words just roll out like clouds and Dylan – superb!

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    1. Thanks! Delighted you like it!

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  12. FindinG neW in memories trUe..
    spReading dayliGht noW.. traveLinG
    further aS hiGhlights thaT groW oN Now..
    SinGinG NatURe SonGs oF RiSinG sunsHine
    Tides.. RiVers StreAms oF FiRe
    iN
    siDe
    Tide
    shoRes
    BRinGinG
    waTeRs dreAms to Air
    oF Stars as SuN sHiNes RiSe..

    BreathE
    noW oF
    LoVinG AiR..:)

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  13. Another memory well presented, Marilyn! Those were the days, eh?

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  14. Ah, this reminds me of being in the Girl Guides, going on camping weekends and singing round the campfire – with guitar of course!

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