In a Fog for Sunday Whirl #261

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Through a Fog

That moment is a snapshot. That wooden dingy
breaking through the fog with red sails in
a perpetual stretch, reaching for deliverance.
Its hull gleaming with thick blackened tar
and pitch paint, the bow chipped by storms and

miscalculations and agitation. Such a headstrong
and trusting craft under the determined eye
of its captain – there standing, there eyeing,
back crooked, knowing that every wall, whether
fog or blind ignorance, has another side to see.

That little boat charged on ambition, cut through
weary-flat water where not a breath of wind
possessed the mist. And then a long oar dipped
the water, a single stroke turning green to slime
against the shore, against rocky walls, clinging.

Each stroke is a tale of travels, inscribed in
fluid calligraphy. It was a memory, indelible
on my fertile heart, waiting for a sanskrit sun
to burn through this deep and prostrated fog.

 

 

Sunday Whirl Wordle #261
slime, stay, travel, charge, bullet, burn,
trust, crook, stand, chip, stretch, sail

6 responses to “In a Fog for Sunday Whirl #261”

  1. How beautifully descriptive this poem is, singing the song of sailing so well.

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  2. I love the calligraphy – i could picture it in the tar on the bottom of the boat – whether real or metaphorical there is a sense of journey..and the trials and tribulations it can bring – also love the picture 🙂

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  3. The boat had been through lots of trials and tribulations to stay afloat!

    Hank

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  4. Nicely done, Misky.

    Pamela ox

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  5. Once again, this is shot with sparkling images that bring the scene vividly to the mind’s eye.

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    1. Thank you. Glad to hear that you liked it.

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