for dVerse: Haibun #18

 
The Victor Writes the History

I keep those memories, treasure them, fall in love with them – over and over again. I colour each one with a whitewash tint to fit, add lilac fragrance like punctuation, form and reform (memories are so delectably malleable), and no one corrects perception, ones private and privileged view, and I hold vigil over my manipulated and reworked history. Exquisite, now, those memories, now that I’ve copied them out in my neatest hand. For me to relive. To suit my needs.

I fell on your words
pierced by eloquent swords
I still remember

written dVerse Poets: Haibun Monday

20 responses to “for dVerse: Haibun #18”

  1. This is beautiful! I treasure words I’ve written of wonderful past times — with children, with my family who has since departed this earth. Memories I treasure each and every time I read from faded pen.

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    1. I used to keep journals, years worth of them, but now this blog serves a similar purpose. 😀 Times move on, I guess.

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  2. This is gorgeous..adding the lilac fragrance to the memories. I wish i had kept journals. I have some from my teen years and university, but most of them are gone.

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  3. Ohhhhh, THIS:
    “Exquisite, now, those memories, now that I’ve copied them out in my neatest hand.”

    YES. Perfect.

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  4. I love the tint, shades of rewriting those unforgettable memories Misky. Indeed, some memories are meant to be re-lived by our neatest hand.

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  5. Brilliant haiku – just marvelous!

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    1. Thanks, Victoria.

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  6. “I still remember.” I love this!

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  7. and I hold vigil over my manipulated
    and reworked history.

    Memories have a special place and are treasured in one’s heart. It is entirely up to us of how and when to remember them. Rightly so Marilyn!

    Hank

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  8. Ooh, those last three lines go way beyond exquisite, Marilyn! Love this!

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    1. Thank you, Walt. 😀

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  9. Oh those memories that we cherish: yes there is a romance with memory!

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  10. Poetry..
    A map
    to Love..:)

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    1. OH! I like that!

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      1. Thanks Misky..
        Loved your
        Poem..
        Always
        Inspiration here..:)

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  11. Suddenly I feel very inadaquate. What beautiful prose!

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    1. Thank you so much!

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  12. I love your prose, so compact and poetic. I especially like “and no one corrects perception, ones private and privileged view”. So true! Late to read the haibuns but so glad I dropped in to read this, Misky.

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