for dVerse: Haibun #17

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Heat: To Sweat & Turn & Tick

By 5 o’clock, I’m buckled into heat. Its grim tactics empty me of summer’s pleasure – no appetite for sweet cherries, no thirst for berries. And tender leaves curl in distress, shrivel into brown and brittle spines as if devoured by cruelty. And so pitiful those cankered apples lay green and bruised, fallen to the ground yesterday. They sweat and turn and tick with maggots. Everything falls before this heat. Gold becomes the sun’s ballast, and silver spins the stars to burn and fall. Even the moon seems a flabby slack, more like a piteous sail lost in the sky. We are all and each lost in this flagellant heat as it rises heavy and naked. And I long to escape into a lukewarm sea.

Those fugitive clouds
blow quiet across the sky
without permission.

 

for dVerse Haibun #17 “Heat

15 responses to “for dVerse: Haibun #17”

  1. Gold becomes the sun’s ballast, and silver spins the stars to burn and fall. Beautiful and powerful line! Great work.

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  2. I specially admire this part:

    Gold becomes the sun’s ballast, and silver spins the stars to burn and fall.

    It would be great to escape to the lukewarm sea.

    Love your haibun Misky!

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  3. So true in cOldest..
    hottest hUman
    life clouds
    float free
    WitH no
    permission
    from anyone
    else but Nature real..

    i suppose
    clouds Free
    kNow TruTh
    liGht uP hiGh..
    aS skY
    fAlls
    heRe
    in so low way..:)

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    1. Oh those slippery clouds! 😀

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      1. Thanks
        Misky
        With
        sMiLes
        Of pretty
        Clouds..:)

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  4. Excellent haibun Misky. It truly is so hot all I want is iced water – in me and on me. and maybe a couple of tomatoes and a cucumber. That’s it. The writing in this is spectacular. The flabby moon, gold for ballast – so much in this to reward the reader.

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    1. I’m delighted you liked it.

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  5. The destructive power of the heat…and your beautiful, evocative haiku…

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    1. Many thanks for reading it.

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  6. “Its grim tactics…”yes, it’s hard to see even the slightest beauty in anything when we’re gripped in such swelter. I love your talent with words, Misky.

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    1. Thank you so very much!

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  7. “devoured by cruelty”..we are by our summer here in India…beautifully put…

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  8. And I long to escape
    into a lukewarm sea

    One gets bogged down when it becomes unbearable. The sea and cool sea breeze should be heavenly Misky

    Hank

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  9. Wonderful watercolor of summer colors. You have done a great job of responding to the daily prompts, too.

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    1. Thanks, Victoria!

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