#3

If Sparrows Played Bagpipes

I made barbecue sauce three days ago.
It’s the scotch that makes it historical,
wakes everything up with a surprise
as if sparrows played bagpipes,
so I slick sauce on some ribs,
a shimmering that makes me smile
like a debutante asked to dance.

 

 

written for dVerse: Quadrille #6 (44 words), and Not a Literary Journal: Day 4 – An Ode

22 responses to “#3”

  1. Oh, Misky. This combines your two passions (and the stunning shimmer of your two talents) so beautifully. I am sooooooo hungry now. I blame you. 😉

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    1. Grab yourself a quick bite to eat!

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      1. Ribs, please. Saucy, saucy, shimmery ribs. Mmmmmm.

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        1. Very spicy, too!

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  2. Yum! (both words and sauce)

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    1. It was darned tasty! Coleslaw turned out okay, too.

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  3. Laughing out loud at the thought of those sparrows but salivating at the sauce. Weird thing is I just downloaded a photo of sauce for another quadrille. Maybe I’ll try anyway.

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  4. Like the thought of sparrows playing bagpipes. Very nice.

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  5. Sounds like some delicious barbeque sauce! It’s almost dinner and you’re making me hungry.

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  6. Oh! I LOVE this…like sparrows playing bagpipes, the debutante smiling….this is just beyond a.m.a.z.i.n.g. I’ll never look at my barbecue sauce the same way again – or sparrows.

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  7. wish I could taste that sauce ….. and what an imagination – sparrows and bagpipes!!!!

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  8. Yes, what a delightful imagination…sparrows playing bagpipes, ha! We have an old family recipe for barbeque sauce that was my grandmother’s…no scotch in hers though, but still spicy. 🙂

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  9. Oh this made me sallivate.. But the sparrows playing bagpipes make me think of a hangover morning… 😉

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  10. Unusual combinations make foe great reading. Let me know if you catch that sparrow – will be worth a fortune! 🙂

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  11. Oh my goodness…..chuckling I am. Shimmering barbecue sauce on ribs and sparrows that play bagpipes….love it! Sharing this with my husband who is the cook/nay chef in our family! 🙂 GREAT use of the word!

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    1. Had to do some serious pruning to do 44 words!

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  12. The sauce makes all the difference. Often the home made ones are preferred

    Hank

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    1. Often? Heck, always, Hank! 😉

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  13. big grins for this piece; I love it 🙂

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    1. Thanks. Always nice to hear.

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  14. Wow. This was a different take on the prompt. Nicely done.

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  15. Thanks for the visit and I can smell that sauce. Love the sparrows playing bagpipes: I know that feeling.

    Elizabeth
    http://soulsmusic.wordpress.com/

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