Day 20 NovPAD Challenge

ai image. Scots pine forest with dust and petrichor rising from a raindrop. B&W

The Architecture of a Moment

The Architecture of Petrichor (long-form list poem)

Because the sky held itself too long.
Because dust remembers it is earth.
Because the stones hum a low, cool note.
Because the roots murmur back to leaves.

Because we recognise the smell of beginnings.
Because it is the scent of promises kept.
Because it carries the ghost of all that ever was.
Because it is patience finally rewarded.

Because it whispers of a clean new start.
Because it maps the corridors of memory.
Because it requires no translation.
Because it is the earth’s own breath.

Because we are, at our core,
made of the same thirsty clay.

Notes: Rooted in the oldest English tradition, Anglo-Saxon accentual verse follows the rhythm of breath and heartbeat rather than syllable or rhyme, where meaning is carried by cadence, image, and pause.

The Architecture of Petrichor (Accentual verse)

Because the sky
held too long.
Because dust knows
it once was earth.

Because stones sing
a cool, low note.
Because roots speak
up to the leaves.

Because we know
beginnings’ smell.
Because rain keeps
old promises.

Because it brings
the ghost of was,
the gift of wait,
the start made clean.

Because this breath
is earth’s own truth—
and we are made
of thirsty clay.

Prateria by Mattia Turzo

Written for Writers’ Digest Poem-a-Day Challenge: “explanation”. Poems/prose, some AI/images ©Misky 2006-2025.

6 responses to “Day 20 NovPAD Challenge”

  1. Prime among scents Petrichor stands.

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  2. As I opened this post- I thought, “I wish she would post the long form and the accentual verse together so I could see the progression…” and much to my delight that is exactly what you did. Two line changes stand out to me- Because we recognise the smell of beginnings./ and we are made
    of thirsty clay.– these are my favorite turns of each of them.

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    1. (smiling) I’ll remember that you like them back to back, and I’ll do that until the end of this challenge.

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      1. I just love looking at the line changes. Your writing is so lovely I’m looking at technique 😍

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        1. I’ll keep them on the same page for you, at least until November’s Poem-a-Day challenge ends.

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