Day 8 NovPAD Challenge

A sharp red shard rising through billowing white clouds, sunlight glinting on its surface; a wound turned to light.

The Architecture of a Moment

Notes: Rooted in the oldest English tradition, Anglo-Saxon accentual verse follows the rhythm of breath and heartbeat rather than syllable or rhyme, where meaning is carried by cadence, image, and pause.


The Architecture of More

The scar will not vanish,
but love knows
the physics of the heart.

Let the wound close
on sharp words,
a sliver of glass.

Love leans against that wound,
curls around it,
until it no longer cuts.

It’s a strange, sharp jewel
in the heart’s stem.
Time,

is a patient vine,
its tendrils grip,
softening the blade,

and it becomes
the shadow behind a blossom.
A flower that tells
its story in colour.

This is the architecture of more,
not less of pain,
but more of love;
a quiet sum
that multiplies the light.


Written for Writers’ Digest Poem-a-Day Challenge: prompt word is More. Poems/prose and some images are ©Misky 2006-2025. For the visually impaired, the featured image is a sharp red shard rising through billowing white clouds, sunlight glinting on its surface; a wound turned to light.

4 responses to “Day 8 NovPAD Challenge”

  1. The architecture of more- you are just on a roll with the great lines this morning. I might be forced to do a Cento of your poetry just so I get to use them……

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  2. Beautiful poem. Time does put some distance between us and the hurt. Then we might see the episode in a slightly different perspective.

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