Day 02.1 NovPAD Challenge

B&W photo AI of children in playground on swings

The Architecture of a Moment

Notes: Rooted in the oldest English tradition, Anglo-Saxon accentual verse follows the rhythm of breath and heartbeat rather than syllable or rhyme, where meaning is carried by cadence, image, and pause.


The Architecture of Joy

Young ones wrapped in November’s breath,
a rustle of coats,
a symphony of zips,
mittens and hats,
cheeks bright with the wind’s rough paint.

They leap and run,
a blur of becoming,
swinging, their boots
kicking clouds into laughter.

Long after the park lies still,
the frame remains;
I hear it ring,
the enduring shape of them.


Written for Writers’ Digest Poem-a-Day Challenge “fun”. Poems/prose and some images are ©Misky 2006-2025.

3 responses to “Day 02.1 NovPAD Challenge”

  1. The Architecture of

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  2. “The Architecture of a Moment” … something only a poet would conjure, let alone take up on the challenge to ink it.

    *A poet ( for me) is not the one who writes poetry, but the one who sees & breathes the poetry in everything.

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    1. That is just the loveliest sentence to read. It is the ink that fills imagination.

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