20 Sept: dVerse Imagist

B&W photo of reflections in puddles and rain

Black Waits (an imagist poem)

Black window stares across the street.
Black curtains hang, charcoal cloth.
A child coughs.
The mother hushes him —
black sleeve across his mouth.

Black rain shines.
Even puddles reflect black —
broken buildings,
black coat flapping against wind.

Black comes quiet:
mail left unread,
a room kept shut,
a name swallowed whole.

Some things root in blackness —
moss in ruin,
seeds that will not be forgiven.

Black is where things bide their hunger.
Black is the held breath before the cut.
Black is the curtain drawn,
and the sleeve that never lets go.

Black waits longer than memory.


Written for dVerse Poets Imagist Poetry. Some artwork is created using Midjourney AI, and is identified as such in the ALT text or captioned. Images are copyright and not to used without permission, which I willingly give when asked, and when not for commercial use. Imagery and poems/prose ©Misky 2006-2025.

16 responses to “20 Sept: dVerse Imagist”

  1. Ahh… Black… the sum of everything and the absence of needless… where always I have felt at home.
    And Beth on top ( pun intended 😆)? Paradiso!!

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    1. Black: Aye. It’s always been a comfortable space for me. As for Beth, she just ‘lives” this song — just brilliant.

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  2. such a classic Imagist poem, Mish – and its one I wish I’d written.

    You’ve painted black into so many corners of life, understatedly even in the repeats.

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    1. If I were Mish, I’d be a much better poet! 😂 But thank you for your lovely comment.

      Misky

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      1. sorry for the misnomer – this poem is unsurpassable though Misky

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  3. Wow wow wow, and I too wish I’d written it.

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    1. Thank you, Rene!

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  4. Wonderful Misky, 🙌 this is very haunting, the use of the cumulative “black” becomes a kind of void, or a holder of things unsaid, things lost. The ending lingers – black is not just everything, it is something that lives on beyond memory 🖤

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    1. I’m glad that you liked this one. Thank you.

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  5. Love it… black is both the lack and everything at once. I like how the theme of what black is repeated in the end…

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    1. Lovely. Thank you so much, Björn.

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  6. Black is my favourite colour, especially to wear, Marilyn, so I am drawn to this quietly black imagist poem.

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    1. Black and white are my favourites — duality, I suppose. I’m very happy to know that you liked it, Kim. Thanks.

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      1. My pleasure, Marilyn.

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  7. Black is portrayed perfectly in this poem, Misk. I love, “black waits longer then memory.”

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