16 Sept: dVerse Prosery

ai image. abstract painting in yellow and black on a white background

Sulphur and Silence

The city never learned how to be quiet — Elias liked it that way; the noise smothered his wife’s laugh. He sat in his worn armchair, the one she always called a mistake, watching the world blur past his third-floor flat.

The yellow fog that rubs its back upon the window-panes moved like a stalking thing, sulphurous and patient. It peered in — not with mercy but with hunger. It was the same fog that waited the night Clara left for the pharmacy, and she didn’t come back.

Elias didn’t reach for the whiskey. He reached for the window latch. A damp tendril slid through the crack, smelling of diesel and old rain. It curled round his wrist like a binding; when he tried to wrench free the room tilted and a cold palm pushed him outward.

The ground never came.

Mercy on my Grave by Aventhis


144-words written for dVerse Poets Prosery including the phrase “The yellow fog that rubs its back upon the window-panes”.  Some artwork is created using Midjourney AI, and is identified as such in the ALT text or captioned. Images are copyright and not to used without permission, which I willingly give when asked, and when not for commercial use. Imagery and poems/prose ©Misky 2006-2025.

15 responses to “16 Sept: dVerse Prosery”

  1. Ha!
    Dark ink and soundtrack … perfect for a Tuesday evening… where is my malt?🥃

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    1. A trifecta! Ink; music; malt. No ice I assume.

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  2. Nice! This is perfectly eerie.

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  3. An eerie Prosery piece, Marilyn, which leaves me with questions about Elias’ relationship with a wife whose laugh he wanted smothered with noise, who didn’t like his worn armchair and didn’t come back from the pharmacy. Was it her cold palm that pushed him?

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    1. Don’t know! I ran out of words! 😃

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  4. Whoa, that was dark and creepy. Well done

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  5. Oh WOW…oh wow oh wow! Totally love this!!

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  6. This was a dark piece…. it seems to me like a man who made one or two mistakes too many in his life….

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    1. Entirely possible!

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  7. Woh! A great opening for a suspenseful story 👌🏼

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    1. Thank you, Sunra!

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