29 Aug: II. The Painter

B&W ai image of a man painting, brush in hand.

II. The Painter (A Six Sentence Poem)

Into the paint —
the brush, blind-eyed.
His shoulder tenses:
a memory
of a burden
not yet carried.

The bristles sweep —
a long, aching curve of road
beneath a sky
he’s never seen.

It is longing.
It is goodbye
to someone
he has not yet met.

He steps back,
opens his eyes —
there it is:

his future, pegged
and waiting for him
in the paint.

Joep Beving – Ab Ovo


Written for Denise’s Six Sentence Story, including the word “peg”. Some artwork is created using Midjourney AI, and is identified as such in the ALT text or captioned. Images are copyright and not to used without permission, which I willingly give when asked, and when not for commercial use. Imagery and poems/prose ©Misky 2006-2025.

9 responses to “29 Aug: II. The Painter”

  1. This leaves me hushed…it speaks eloquently, and there’s something deep down in the soul that is offered up to readers…at least for me, maybe because I feel a connection with a couple painters.

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    1. I delighted that it resonated with you. Thank you.

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      1. You’re most welcome.

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  2. You always manage to surprise me, dear Misky! From my neck tension from painting to the sore curve to the (painted) future that awaits me. All sounds pretty familiar 🙂

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    1. To know that there’s a connection made is a gift to a writer — thank you.

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  3. Lovely verse- and that music is like a mediation. Brilliant combination

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    1. Thank you, Violet.

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  4. Delightful, and beautifully done.

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