27 Aug: Where You From, Then?

B&W photo (ai image) of an English village, stone houses and cobbled pavements with view up a hill.

Where Are You From Then?

Aura — Episode One (A Six Sentence Story)

Päiviö Clartz had lived above the Co-op for three winters, long enough for most people to forget he wasn’t from here — except when he spoke, or cooked fish in the mornings, or wore that thick Nordic jumper with snowflake shoulders and a reindeer that might’ve been a cow.

Zofia, who worked as a Polish-English language translator and ran the book exchange at the church hall (because she believes in stories that speak for themselves), and had arrived from Kraków twenty-two years earlier — was still told “your English is very good” at least once a week: she’d learned to smile with her lips closed, because anything more would be mistaken for gratitude.

Morag, Glaswegin by birth and war-axe by temperament, didn’t think of herself as foreign to anyone — until someone down south called her accent “quaint” and offered to slow down their own speech so she could keep up.

On Tuesdays, the three of them sometimes crossed paths — Päiviö with kindling under one arm, Zofia with a paper bag of tinned soup, Morag with a newspaper she never paid for — and they’d nod, polite, as if none of them had ever once stood in a queue and felt the low sting of being asked: “Where are you from, then?”

That week, in the shop, a new clerk with a soft West African lilt said to Zofia, “I love your accent — where were you born?” and as Andrea scanned tins of beans in silence, she gave Zofia a glance — unreadable, but not unkind — and Zofia, with perfect manners, replied, “I was born where winter is a profession,” a phrase that offered no answer and no peg on which to hang further questions.

I am Aura — the breeze between vowels, the wind that remembers who asked the question, and who always has to answer it.


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Written for Denise’s Six Sentence Story, including the word “peg”. Some artwork is created using Midjourney AI, and is identified as such in the ALT text or captioned. Imagery and poems/prose ©Misky 2006-2025.

29 responses to “27 Aug: Where You From, Then?”

  1. NYFB*… If only we could answer like we should.
    Having said that, Zofia’s reply is pure gold**.

    Well, this series will cut too close to the bone for some. Keep your ink sharp, M.

    ( Not Your Fokin Business)
    ** ( imagine that I was called a foreigner in my own country when I started my medical practice not in the town I grew up)

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    1. Yes, I believe it, because I have lived that very scenario. Even a north-south divide within a small town can result in a them and us attitude.

      But what cannot be denied is my own truth: I have lived this for 45-years, as an immigrant; as an ex-pat; as a foreigner who time and again had to reaffirm foreignness for visa extensions; and most interestingly, the country of my birth feeling more foreign to me than rebellion in Côte d’Ivoire ever did.

      This one will be short-lived, but there is a story in it.

      Thank you for your always valued comment.

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  2. I used to delight in winding up my friend by telling him how good his English was. He was South African.

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    1. Ah yes, the classic tease, the grin that keeps its hands in its pockets, and that’s where the heart of the story lives. As always, thanks for your comment, Pete. 

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  3. I really enjoyed this. Looking forward to reading more prose from you.

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    1. Thank you! I appreciate you taking the time to say so.

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  4. People used to ask me that. Or the equally obnoxious what are you. When I said I was from there, sometimes people wanted to argue. As if they had a say.

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    1. Yes — the way a simple question can feel like a demand for proof, or even an invitation to argue. It’s about who gets to claim belonging. Thank you for sharing your experience here — it deepens the ache behind the story.

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  5. Much better to get to know the person, how long s/he’s been there really doesn’t matter.

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    1. Agreed, Mimi. Agreed.

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  6. Good reason to work at that book exchange: because she believes in stories that speak for themselves

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    1. Thank you, Frank.

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  7. I am immersed already!

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    1. That’s a good sign! Thank you, Chris.

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  8. A well told tale with a touch of the other worldly, Misky. I too, love Zofia’s response.
    Your choice of “soundtrack” is most complimentary.

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    1. Thank you, Denise. Fabulous prompt word this weed; it’s worked its way into several things I’ve written this week. And yes, the soundtrack: new from Robert Plant. I’ve been listening to a lot of music the past few days, and this popped up like a gift.

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    1. Thank you so much.

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  9. Stunning, just stunning.

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    1. Thank you very much, Rene.

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      1. You’re most welcome.

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  10. Great opening for what I (hope) will be a new Serial Six

    fave phrase:

    I was born where winter is a profession,” a phrase that offered no answer and no peg on which to hang further questions.”

    v. cool

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    1. Thank you, Clark. Yes, a new series.

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  11. We often forget we are all immigrants.

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    1. 🤗 Forgive my pedantry: Are the children of immigrants also called immigrants? I’m not sure about that, Liz. And the indigenous people of North America surely aren’t either. It’s very complicated — and the lines keep shifting.

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      1. Astute point about how lines keep shifting. I was thinking that we all come from somewhere else, whether geographical or cultural (and family, within culture). So best, perhaps, to think who we are at present or potential…and not get trapped–or entrap–with labels. 🙂

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        1. I think that’s an admirable view. 🥰

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